RV
By Keith Suek
Self-published
244 pgs.
Being a book reviewer can at times
be a maddening challenge with absolutely no rhyme or reason. Keith Suek, who
hails from Wyoming, sent us his book, RV, after meeting us at a comic convention
in Cheyenne. In the accompanying letter, he mentioned not getting any response
via Amazon and hoping a review from us would help shake things up. Well, we
have no idea if that will happen, but then again we do know the damn book did
in fact shake us up…radically.
It is almost impossible to
accurately review because no matter how we approach it, there is the reality
we’ll be leaving behind negative conations in what we are about to say. So,
dear readers of good, solid action fiction take what we say with a huge grain
of salt…and be wary. Keith Suek is not a bad writer at all. In fact, underneath
the editorial mess this book is, we truly believe there exist a very talented
storyteller. So, before going much further in this review, let’s talk story.
The American/Mexican border. An
oilman named Ian D’eath teams up with a Border Patrolman named Hector Munoz to
take on a deadly drug cartel called the Arana. These South of the Border thugs
are merciless and have no qualms in killing whoever stands in the way of their
making money; be it flooding the country with illegal drugs, kidnapping young
teenage American girls and selling them to Arab millionaires or cutting up
Mexican natives from the hills to sell their body parts. Again, as we said,
these are really bad hombres that Ian and Hector have, through various life
choices, found themselves opposing. When they learned of six recently snatched
girls, they put together a posse of their own, cross over into Mexico and
attempt to rescue them.
The bullets fly fast and furious as
Suek obviously knows his firearms and is not the least be squeamish in
describing what hot lead of various calibers will do to the human body. There
are parts in this book that read like masochistic poetry, the violence is so in
your face. On this front, as a pure, unadulterated actioner, RV is like a
racing Grayhound that has broken its leash and escape. The pages almost turn
themselves.
So what’s the problem? The problem
is no page in this entire book ever saw the scrutiny of an editor, pro or
amateur. The book is a grammatical nightmare filled with so many typos, and
punctuation sins that they mimic the shells spitting from the weapons in the
story. It’s as if Suek can’t be bothered with that bread of his sandwich and
just wants to get to the slice bologna between it. All well and good for the
author, but not so for the hapless reader who opens that cover.
We truly wish we could give this
book nothing but high marks, but that wouldn’t be fair to our readers who
expect a modicum of polish in a published book. Maybe RV is in itself what is
good and what is bad about today’s self-publishing market. On one hand, Suek
was able to get his manuscript in print…on the other hand, it got into print as
a mess and that is unacceptable. Final
word here. Kevin Suek, you know how to
write…find an editor on-line and pay them to work with you. You have so much
potential, don’t let it go to waste.